Saturday, March 21, 2009

Abstract Love !!!

I walk alone on this way with no astuteness in my mind ......... Is it the right thing to do ?? Who cares ....... Life is all about living it once to a great extent !!! I am sure by doing this I am not going to harm anyone ........

Am I am feeling lonely that it would add beauty into my life ?
Move on ...... Its just a start ..... Live life like no one ever thought you to live .... But this walk is too long .... Ghosh !!! .... Wish I can turn back ..... Ahhhhhhh........

No .... I am almost midway !!!
Well let me walk to see my person of my dream standing all alone waiting for me ......... I see those burnt flowers .... smell baked air .... the path is obdurate .... Please take me there soon .... I give up .... No ..... I need to see her outstretched ..... Tears roll in my eyes ....Will she be mine ??

18 comments:

Rashmi PuttaswamyGowda said...

Nice and emotional,Good ne again Rahul

Alok said...

Carry on... you will make things work.

the pink orchid said...

the answer is always yes when the question is asked by a pure heart..

my personal opinion.. :)

Raghav said...

if you look with a sincere and honest heart then you surely will

Jarlin said...

Good One...keep writing.

Anonymous said...

Tomorrow's life is too late. Live today

Solilo said...

Touching!

Divesh said...

soooo much confusion...

Mahesh said...

Is this a fiction ??

Chaitra said...

Gud one Rahul.. i just remembered few lines here
"Show me the way
Take me to love
Things only heard now I want to feel Two beings with one beating heart
For their whole lives not to part
Show them the way
Take them to love"

Rahul Viswanath said...

@Chaitra : Good one .... great pen down !!!

@Mahesh : Most of the abstracts are fictitious Bud :)

Vijay Kumar Radhakrishnan said...

Nice !

AJEYA RAO said...

Nice collection of thoughts...Revealing yet concealing many emotions. :-)

Bindu Nayar said...

:-}

sydney said...

Maybe she will. Maybe she won't. haha jk.

:)

Nice prose!

Luscious Sealed Lips said...

Make sure she is alone and put on your sense of humor, wit, charm and perfume. She will be all yours.

Just in case you see someone wanting to chase you, RUN - you will find the next one sooner than you found the last. ;)

Kisses.

bondgal_rulz said...

I'm sure she will. :)

Nice one.

Cheers

nituscorner said...

that was a great read. looking forward for more.