I walk alone on this way with no astuteness in my mind ......... Is it the right thing to do ?? Who cares ....... Life is all about living it once to a great extent !!! I am sure by doing this I am not going to harm anyone ........Am I am feeling lonely that it would add beauty into my life ? Move on ...... Its just a start ..... Live life like no one ever thought you to live .... But this walk is too long .... Ghosh !!! .... Wish I can turn back ..... Ahhhhhhh........
No .... I am almost midway !!! Well let me walk to see my person of my dream standing all alone waiting for me ......... I see those burnt flowers .... smell baked air .... the path is obdurate .... Please take me there soon .... I give up .... No ..... I need to see her outstretched ..... Tears roll in my eyes ....Will she be mine ??
18 comments:
Nice and emotional,Good ne again Rahul
Carry on... you will make things work.
the answer is always yes when the question is asked by a pure heart..
my personal opinion.. :)
if you look with a sincere and honest heart then you surely will
Good One...keep writing.
Tomorrow's life is too late. Live today
Touching!
soooo much confusion...
Is this a fiction ??
Gud one Rahul.. i just remembered few lines here
"Show me the way
Take me to love
Things only heard now I want to feel Two beings with one beating heart
For their whole lives not to part
Show them the way
Take them to love"
@Chaitra : Good one .... great pen down !!!
@Mahesh : Most of the abstracts are fictitious Bud :)
Nice !
Nice collection of thoughts...Revealing yet concealing many emotions. :-)
:-}
Maybe she will. Maybe she won't. haha jk.
:)
Nice prose!
Make sure she is alone and put on your sense of humor, wit, charm and perfume. She will be all yours.
Just in case you see someone wanting to chase you, RUN - you will find the next one sooner than you found the last. ;)
Kisses.
I'm sure she will. :)
Nice one.
Cheers
that was a great read. looking forward for more.
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